Review this draft against my voice guide.

VOICE GUIDE
[Who we help, how we speak and terms to use or avoid.]

WRITING EXAMPLES
[Short authorised samples.]

DRAFT
[Text to review.]

Identify the passages that feel inconsistent and explain why. Suggest a restrained edit for each. Flag unsupported promises separately. Preserve accurate details and personality. Return the changes for review rather than replacing the whole piece unnecessarily.